請(qǐng)幫我改下這篇英語作文，謝謝！

第1句話可以改成 First， he is very kind and gets along well with others.第2行中的care應(yīng)該加s,因?yàn)橹髡Z是第3人稱單數(shù)。第3行中 others后面要加上系動(dòng)詞are,最后一行answer建議改為early reply（早日回復(fù)）

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請(qǐng)幫我修改一下這片英語作文謝謝！

阿巴阿巴阿巴……你這是逐字從中文翻譯的吧？建議直接用中文給我說一遍，我給你寫……滿分15分的話，我作文一般都是14、15分。

I am glad to hear of you will come to my home.

of 改成 that，或者去掉。

Welcoming to your coming!

寫作 Welcome! 就可以了。

In addition, I have something will tell you.

will 改成 to，“我有一些事要告訴你”不應(yīng)該這么直譯[捂臉]。

First, we'll take part in activity of school.

“activity of school”看著有點(diǎn)不舒服，建議改成“an activity of our school”。

What's more, we will look over towntown to visit the beautiful sites in the afternoon.

towntown 什么鬼……你想說的是下午用瀏覽器看美麗的網(wǎng)站？建議寫作 We will use a browser to visit the beautiful sites in the afternoon.

In the end, we could watch TV and play games or chat with each other.

從語境看，這句話是將來時(shí)態(tài)，could 換成 can。

“watch TV and play games or chat with each other” 建議改成 “watch TV, play games and chat with each other”。

I think you may will have a good experience.

兩個(gè)情態(tài)動(dòng)詞也是夠了……留下 will，去掉 may。

I am looking forward to your coming.

這個(gè)真沒毛病。

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雖然有的地方不確定錯(cuò)不錯(cuò)，但大部分很確定（比如may will，簡直了）。

綜合來看，10分左右吧……

請(qǐng)大家?guī)臀倚薷囊幌逻@篇英語作文，詳細(xì)一點(diǎn)，謝謝?。。?/h3>首先你這篇文章的高級(jí)詞匯太少了 a lot of =可以用 a large amount of 很形象的描述很多，更重要的是詞匯多 或者用 numerous 對(duì)不對(duì)。 such as＝同樣的道理 ，例如也有很多高級(jí)詞匯， for instance 這就是個(gè)比較好的高級(jí)詞匯 But= 可以用 nonetheless 你看這個(gè)詞看起來就很難，只要你記住，下次就可以大展身手了 或者用 whereas 第二 你的句式太單調(diào)了，廢話多 不要總是we ，i的要多用復(fù)合句。比如第二句話講作息時(shí)間的，可以這樣寫 The study time of whole day is from 5:20 to 21:30

可以幫我批改一下這篇英語作文嗎

Should we help strangers? （即使是標(biāo)題也不用每個(gè)單詞都大寫，你又不是專業(yè)論文） 【大寫的明顯是我改的】 AT A YOUNG AGE, we WERE taught to help AS MANY PEOPLE as we can, no matter HOW LITTLE DO WE KNOW THEM. Recently, there are increasing number of people SPOKE OUT against THIS TEACHING/IDEA. Whether OR NOT we should help strangers ONCE A

請(qǐng)幫我批改一下這篇英語作文，謝謝

請(qǐng)忽略句子的大小寫。 建議由上至下為文章的順序 maybe a lot of people the answer is yes 這句話有兩個(gè)主語，可以改為maybe for a lot of people the answer is yes some people think that they don't ~ 用法不地道，英語中這種賓從有否定前置的用法，可以改為some people don't think ~(that 常省略) news says that 用法依然不規(guī)范， says 可換為 reads there's why they don't help others 估計(jì)你寫錯(cuò)了，